ERIC Number: ED568695
Record Type: Non-Journal
Publication Date: 2015-Jan-9
Pages: 216
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Examining the Impact of Technology on Primary Students' Revision of Written Work
Lisy, Jennifer Garrette
Online Submission, Ph.D. Dissertation, University of Illinois at Chicago
Few studies have examined the revision processes of second grade students and even fewer have explored the impact of digital writing on young students' revisions. This study utilized a within subject crossover trial using randomized block assignment (AB | BA) for counterbalancing. This study sought to determine (1) whether revising on paper versus revising on the computer significantly impacted revisions second graders made; (2) whether revising on paper verses the computer affected the change in quality from the first to final draft; (3) whether the cognitive load of transcription, writing speed and spelling ability affected the revisions second graders make when revising on paper and the computer; and (4) whether the cognitive load of transcription affected the change in quality scores when students revise on paper and the computer. 74 second graders from a middle class suburb participated in the study. Students received training on how to use the computer to type and edit texts and completed cognitive load measures on paper and the computer for writing speed and spelling ability. Each of the four classes was assigned to one of two conditions: paper revision, then computer revision or computer revision, then paper revision. Students wrote and revised two stories. Analyses revealed that second grade students made twice the number of revisions on computer than on paper. Across mediums, students primarily made low-level revisions: additions, substitutions, and deletions. Analyses of quality indicators determined that students increased word count in both mediums, with a greater increase when revising on paper. Percent of words spelled correctly increased in both mediums, with a greater increase on the computer likely due to the availability of spell check. Cognitive load measures indicated a typing was significantly slower than handwriting, but spelling ability significantly increased on the computer over handwriting. These findings supported previous research. Overall this study determined that second graders were able to effectively revise texts using paper and the computer. The computer proved to support students spelling resulting in an increase in the number of revisions and the percent of words spelled correctly. Computers can be a beneficial writing tool for second grade students. Appended are: (1) Computer and Mobile Device Access and Use Survey; (2) Writing What You Read Narrative Rubric from CRESST; (3) Writing What You Read: Overall Effectiveness Rubric; (4) Fluency Task; (5) Lesson Plans; and (6) Revision Scoring Guide.
Publication Type: Dissertations/Theses - Doctoral Dissertations; Tests/Questionnaires; Reports - Research
Education Level: Elementary Education; Grade 2; Primary Education; Early Childhood Education
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Language: English
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Identifiers - Assessments and Surveys: Wide Range Achievement Test
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